Friday, April 16, 2010

My story! (finally)

Chapter one:
Svendoolia.

“okay, I can do this. It’s just a basement.”
I looked down into the creepy chasm of dark doom.
I took a deep breath, and went down the first step. As I descended, I thought to myself,
“why the heck does the sled have to be kept down here?” and I had a point, you know.
As my feet touched the floor I heard a crunch. I think we all know what that came from.
“darn mice.” I hopped over the laundry pile, and ducked under the lamp. “oh! Lamp! Duh.” I pulled the cord, and suddenly, there was light. “much better!” then, I looked in the corner, where the sled usually was. Instead, I saw a long pole. No, two long poles.
With faces. And, by then I was pretty sure they were people, not poles.
“what are you two doing in my basement?” one of them stepped forward. “you’ll find out soon enough.” She said, and snapped her fingers. Suddenly, the entire room was colorful, then wavy, and then it disappeared. All I could See now, was waves of color, and flashes of my house, some stars, and I think Saturn. “what the heck is this?” I shouted to no one in particular. “why, this is the space warp! Haven’t you ever seen one before?”
“no!” now I was panicking. Whoever these people were, were kidnapping me,
And wherever I was, was not earth. “oh! I’m sorry! We haven’t introduced ourselves!”
One said. “my name is Kitten. Queen Kitten, of Totoro. And this is Queen Sunset of Anastar. We’ve come here from the planet of Bluna because we need your help!”
“wait a minute.” I said, confused.. “I thought Bluna was imaginary.” Recently I had created an imaginary world called bluna, which I traveled to whenever I could. But I hadn’t gone there for months, and my memory of it was growing fuzzy.
“well, you went there so many times that it became real. The universe works in mysterious ways.”
“oh.” I said, scratching my neck. “well anyway, My name is Jessie. Why were we going to Bluna again?” “oh yeah!” Queen sunset said. “we’re here because of The Aurora Gemstone.” “the what?” “don’t interrupt. The Aurora Gemstone is what keeps Bluna going, What Keeps the temperature in check, And makes sure it stays hidden.
You see, Bluna isn’t like other planets. As you know, It was Created by your, imagination and After awhile of pretending, Bluna became so real that it became a reality. But since you hadn’t been paying attention to science and all that stuff when you thought Bluna up, your imagination Created the Aurora Gemstone to keep all of us alive.” Kitten nodded, and looked to me. “but Recently, well, fifteen minutes ago, we realized that the Aurora Gemstone had been stolen by who knows who! And that’s where you come in.” ok, this was officially weird. “but why do I come in?” “well,” kitten said. “mainly because you are the creator of bluna, and also because we can’t do this alone. So. will you pleeease help us?”
“no.” “pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?” “oh fine! But on one condition. If it’s been a month and all this isn’t over, you take me back to earth. Deal?” “deal! Oh, we’re here!” “quickly!” sunset said. “think of what you want to look like!” I thought real hard, and looked down at myself. It had worked! I was now taller, with long hair.
Suddenly the colors vanished, and I saw what I presumed was Svendoolia, the kingdom I had created for myself to rule. Only, the sky was brown, and the plants were dark and wilted. There was no one in the streets at all,
Not even animals. The svendoolia I had created was bright, and happy. Nothing like this! “ok, I changed my mind. I’m helping you no matter what!”
“well, that’s good. Come on, we need to get to the eagle palace.”


Chapter Two
Forest Trek.

When we got inside the palace, I had to shield my eyes.
Everything was so bright after the darkness outside!
When I could finally see, it was fantastic! There was a huge chandelier on the ceiling,
And the siding of the walls was gold! There was also a red carpet leading up to a jeweled
Throne in the middle of the room, and busy people carrying towels, and food, and other things were walking hurriedly back and forth.
As I was gaping at the scene, Kitten whispered to me; “Queen Sunset’s palace is even more beautiful!” just then, a big duck walked up. It must have been daisy, the chef I had created, because she was wearing an apron and Mittens, and carrying a plate of cookies!
“daisy!” kitten and Sunset ran toward daisy, and gave her a group hug.
“I haven’t seen you for ages!” “its only been a week daisy. We were just camping!”
Said eagle. “oh dear,” said Daisy. “I don’t suppose you saw-“ “we did. That’s why we brought her!” she said, pointing to me. “oh my!” Daisy said, walking over to me. “isn’t this Queen eagle?” “yes, I guess I am. Is there a problem with that?” I said. “and my name is not eagle.” “oh, but it is! Don’t you remember? That’s the name you chose for yourself on bluna. Aside from that, if you’re going to be finding that gem thing,
You’ll need supplies. I’ll go make you some lunches, and you go and find blankets, a compass, coats, and grappling hooks.” “grappling hooks?” I said, raising one eyebrow. “yes, grappling hooks. You never know.” At that, daisy went off to make lunch, and we went to find everything else. On our way to were Sunset supposed the grappling hooks were, I realized there was more to the palace than the front suggested! There was a room full of pets, there was a room full of pillows and trampolines, there was even a room with all types of dessert in it! Finally, we reached the ( and believe me when I say this,) mountain climbing room. We went in, got the hooks, and went out. There was no problem finding the other stuff. After that, we went back to daisy and she packed everything together in a suitcase. And so, we were soon on our way. The forest of svendoolia didn’t look half bad, even with everything wilted. There was a nice river next to the path, even though it was brown. And far ahead I could tell there was a waterfall. Sunset looked at me, and followed my gaze. “of course! That’s where we’ll stay tonight!” “what?!” I said.
I didn’t want to wake up wet! No way! But Sunset had her mind made up. And so, we started walking toward the waterfall. It was a long way to it, even though it was visible.
While we were walking, I saw a cozy looking cottage. “why can’t we stay there tonight?”
I said, hopefully. “nope!” said eagle and sunset in unison. I sighed, and went on. After awhile, I noticed the path was getting rocky. “uh oh.” Kitten said. “uh oh what?” I said.
“well, rocky roads have rock rats! And rock rats are bad news.”
“why are they ba-“ but before I could finish, I giant rat covered in rocks jumped out of the ground and bared its teeth! Needless to say, everyone screamed. Even in all the confusion, I remembered the grappling hooks we had packed, and that we each were carrying one. I hurled mine at the rat and it shrieked as the hook dug into its skin!
It sank back into the earth hissing. “whoa.” Said Kitten. “you saved us! I think we can stay at the cottage tonight. We’ll need our rest in case of more rock rats.” So we walked back to the cottage, and went in. on the inside, there was a living room with a nice fireplace. And a nice couch. We all lay down, and slowly drifted off to sleep.
When we woke up, the sun wasn’t shining, but you could tell it was morning. The sky was slightly lighter. Well, we went back out and started walking again. Sunset and kitten still wanted me to see the waterfall. Even though today, as the darkness was getting worse, I could see in the distance that its water had turned brown. While we were walking, I looked at the compass. There was something funny about it. The directions were, instead of NSEW, were ABRL. When I asked kitten about it, she said;
“those directions stand for Ahead, Behind, Right, and Left. Since Bluna has the Aurora gemstone to thank for itself, there are no magnetic poles, so our compasses point to the aurora gemstone.” “wouldn’t it always be trying to point down then?” “no. the Aurora Gemstone isn’t in the exact center of Bluna. It’s positioned slightly to the left. Or right, depending on your viewpoint.” “oh.” We walked for awhile more, until we came across some bushes. With, and you aren’t going to believe this, boxing gloves sticking out of them. “aha!” Kitten said, running to a bush. “ boxer bushes!” “what?” I said. I had forgotten what boxer bushes were. “boxer bushes!” she said again, obviously excited. Though it seemed to me at the point, that she was excited about nothing. “I challenged one of these once! Toughest fighter I ever met, but not as tough as me! First he punched me in the gut, then I gave him an uppercut, which is hard if your opponent has no chin. We were both injured but the…”
While she was going through her story, Sunset whispered to me;
“you might want to sit down. We could be here for awhile before she finishes!”
“hey!” Kitten said, with a Fake angry face. “the point is, I know how to beat this thing!”
“but-“ “just watch!” with that said, Kitten punched the bush in one of its gloves. But while it was trying to punch back, she started tickling it! The bush started shaking like crazy until its gloves just popped off. Kitten picked them up, and said, “girls, we’re eating glove tonight!” now I was really confused. “well, technically we’re eating glove today.” Said sunset. “yeah yeah whatever.” Sunset took out a pocketknife and handed it to eagle. She used it to cut one of the gloves into thirds, and handed us each a piece. They started eating theirs, but I wasn’t so sure. Kitten noticed my confused face, and said; “try it! It’s a delicacy in svendoolia!” “yeah,” I said, still unsure. “and I’ve heard fried iguana is also a delicacy.” But still, I broke off a chunk and tasted it if I had made It up, it couldn’t be that bad. The flavor was incredible! It was salty, sweet, sour, spicy, tangy, savory, and a few flavors that haven’t been invented yet! it was crunchy, yet it melted in my mouth! Kitten and Sunset looked at me, then started laughing. I realized that I was thinking out loud! My face turned red.
“don’t worry!” sunset said, still snickering. “that’s what happened to me when I first *snicker* tried it!” Kitten, who had finally calmed down, said; “yeah! Me too! Only I said it with a face you wouldn’t believe!” she made a face. I looked at them, and started laughing too. When we had finished one glove, kitten put the other in her pocket and we continued on. Along the way I saw lots of other strange plants in svendoolia. The baby ballroot, the jugweed, and so on. Finally, we made it to the Waterfall. Eagle walked up to it, and motioned for me to follow. “come on guys!” she said. She edged along the rocks on the side of the pool beneath,
And went behind the waterfall! Now I remembered. “come on in!” she said.
Slowly and carefully, me and sunset made our way into what I could see, was a cave!
“wow!” I said. “this is so cool!” “that’s not it.” Sunset said. “it’s not?” “you’ll see.” We continued on until we hit a bend in the cave. When we walked around I saw furniture! A bed, a picnic table, a couch, and some grooves in the wall shaped like shelfs that were covered in toys and games! I was so glad I made this up. “this is it!” sunset said. kitten started unpacking our lunch, and we ate half, and saved half for later. We also had the other glove, which was still delicious. After awhile we headed out, because even though we had planned to sleep there, it was still daytime, and they had to continue. We kept walking until I stumbled upon a hole. It was right in the middle of the path, and as far as I could tell, had no bottom. kitten walked up to it. “hmmmmm.” She said. She dropped a stone in.
From the hole came a faint; “hey! That hurt!” we heard a scrambling and the sound of rocks falling until finally, a fuzzy creature that looked like a tribble (from Star Trek.) with legs and arms came out! “what are you people doing on my property!?”
It yelled in our faces, actually creating wind, it was so loud. This seemed rude, especially since I had nearly killed myself because of his hole. “hey.” I said. “I definitely don’t remember making something as rude as you. You can’t be from here!”
“that’s right!” the Creature said. “im from the planet Nougon, and I don’t appreciate that bomb you sent up there. That’s the only reason I live in this dump.”
“what bomb?” said Kitten, confused. (wouldn’t you be?) the creature scratched his head.
“Whaddya mean? That thing definitely came from this place. I saw it! Straight from Bluna, Clear as day!” Sunset looked at all of us, one by one. “im pretty sure,” she said.
“that no kingdom on Bluna does, has, or will make bombs. They’re illegal!”
“hey…” I said. “maybe it was the guy who took the Aurora Gemstone?”
“that’s possible.” Said kitten. “and it also means now we have to find him more than ever.” “well that beats all!” the creature said. “you guys weren’t the ones what blowed up my flower Garden. You can pass! Just don’t step on my petunias. They finally bloomed today! Ta ta!” “hm. He was nice. Sort of.” I said as we went on. Eventually we came across a sign, that had four arrows pointing in different directions. One said “Boxer-Bush grove half a mile” another said “Climbing Trii 10 ft” I looked over to my left, where that sign was pointing. Sure enough, there was a tree. But all the branches were colored, and the leaves square!! I looked back to the sign. A third sign said: “Who knows?”
And the one on top proclaimed: “friendship island 2 miles”
“friendship island?” I said. “that’s a cheesy name.” “you remember why it’s named that?” said Kitten. “why?”
“because its literal. The whole island is in the shape of the word ‘friendship”
“huh.” “hey!” said sunset, pointing her finger in the air. “I just remembered, Friendship island is home to the fairy princess! She might know where the guy who stole the Aurora Gemstone is!” “lets go then!” I said. And so, we started walking in the direction the sign pointed. Along the way, we stumbled over a number of holes surprisingly identical to the first, each with a tribble-looking creature in it. Eventually, we came upon another signpost. This one had only two signs on it, one pointing toward “the terrible twin” and another to “the Terrorable twin” whoever had written the signs was obviously a terrible speller. I don’t think “terrorable” is even a word! “hmm” said sunset, scratching her head. “we can’t go ahead anymore, the path is forked!” “then what should we do?” I said. “lets go in the direction of the terrorable twin. That sounds better than the terrible twin. Or at least less terrifying.” “evidently” so we continued on. Soon we began to come across more signs, each bearing a warning, such as “turn back if you like your soul!”
“warning: unspeakable horrors ahead!” and “don’t keep walking!” I could hear owls hooing, and the sky was turning an even darker shade of brown, telling me it was getting late. The trees were beginning to form a cave, and the sky was getting harder to differentiate the sky from the branches. Finally, we came across an old cottage. On the door was a sign saying: “ the dwelling of Tina the Terrorable.” We walked up the front porch, and knocked on the door. From inside there was a loud “EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!” and then nothing. I opened the door to see an old lady hiding under a couch. “what are you doing under there?” I said. “are you a burglar?” said the old lady. “no” “are you a witch? Or a terrorist? Or a murderer?”
“no, no, and no. I’m just a girl. My name is Jessie.” “my name is Tina the Terrorable.” “than shouldn’t you be terrifying or something?” “no!” she exclaimed. “don’t you know what terrorable means? It means I’M the one afraid” “than what are all the signs out front for? And the tree cave?” the signs are to keep burglars and witches and terrorists and murderers away, and the tree cave looks much better when the sun is out. Oh but you must be here for something! Otherwise why would you be here? Maybe you’re here for tea, are you here for tea? I’ll go make some tea.” The she rushed into the kitchen to make the aforementioned tea. While she was making tea we all sat down on the couch. She came in and set the tea down on the table. “so,” she said. “what are you here for?” “we’re here for directions.” I said. “directions to where?” “to friendship island.” “oh dear.” She said, wrinkling her eyebrows. “what?” “I’m afraid it’s not that simple. I’ll have to get the map.” She rushed over to a cabinet in the corner, and started rooting through drawers.
“ah!” she exclaimed, holding up a piece of papyrus. “here it is!” she walked back over.
She sat down. “now, this is f svendoolia. It has specific directions that lead from here to Friendship island.” I looked at the map. On the way to friendship island, there were many symbols that described a few things that probably weren’t good. “this,” tina said, pointing to a little cottage on the map. “is where we are. On the way to friendship island, you’ll have to pass through the davidsons snow hideout. To do that, you’ll have to go through their house of surprises. You’ll also have to find their snow house, which, unfortunately, is usually hidden in a different place every time. After that you’ll undoubtedly find the monkey kings tree house, where you should spend the night because one, it will be dark by then, and two, he uses bamboo sheets which, I’m told, are very comfortable. You’ll also have to go through the haunted forest, and to do that, you’ll need this.” She handed me a chain with a rabbits foot, a small horseshoe, a dried four-leaf-clover, and a dream-Catcher on it. “wear this around your neck, for good luck. After that, to go over the bridge that leads to friendship island, you’ll have to answer the question the easter-island head asks you.” “well then,” eagle said. “we’d better get going!” and so, we set out on our journey to friendship island.

Chapter three
The Journey.

We had been walking for awhile, when suddenly, it began to get colder.
I shivered and hugged my sides. “here” sunset said. “the coats daisy made us pack.” “thanks.” We all put them on. We kept walking until the ground started to turn white. It was snowing! Everything around us was a winter wonderland! “I’m guessing,” I said. “that this is where the davidsons snow house is.” “that’s right.” Said sunset. “and I’m guessing its up there.” I followed her gaze. At least half a mile away from us was a huge mountain! “maybe we should climb it, and see if the hideout is up there?” “good idea.” Said kitten. “lets go!” we climbed for hours and the top of the mountain still looked far away. Somewhere in the middle, I heard a loud noise. I looked up. “AVALANCHE!” I shouted! We all ran down the mountain, but the avalanche was coming too fast! Finally, I crouched down in a ball and waited. The avalanche kept getting louder, and louder, until finally…
Nothing. I looked up. “this isn’t the mountain.” I whispered to myself. I was in a room, with walls made of snow! “where am i?” I said to no one in particular. “why,” said a voice from nowhere. “you’re in our snow house!” suddenly, two Boys popped out at me from behind a chair. “I’m David.” Said one. “I’m David.” Said the other. Another boy about four years old walked slowly out from behind the chair. “I’m Tyler.” He said.
I looked at them, confused. “but,” I said, raising one eyebrow. “but if you’re David, and you’re David, then shouldn’t he be-“ “our mother decided too late that naming us all the same was a bad idea.” Said the tallest. “um,” said the middle-sized david, who was wearing glasses. “david? I do believe that she might want to know where she is, seeing that she is obviously not from around here.” “oh, right. We are the Davidson’s, and you are in our snow house. Wait a minute.” He said, leaning in and looking at me funny. “I saw you in a book once. You’re supposed to be the creator of bluna!”
“oh,” I said, stammering. “I, I guess I am.” “wow!” said tyler. “I sawed you in a fairytale book once! Cept’ you were wearin’ a dress.” “well,” said the one with glasses. “this is an occasion worth celebrating! Lets make a feast in honor of this day! I’ll get started on the quiche.” “and I’ll get started on the salad!” said the tallest one. “tyler, you can chop the carrots.” “yay!” “wait!” I said. “where are Kitten and Sunset?” “what?” said the tallest one. “there were people with you?” “yes!” I was shouting now, and I was starting to cry. “oh. I’m sorry, we didn’t find anyone else. I’m sure they’re ok. If you get far enough up the mountain, the snow is made of vanilla pudding.” “huh?” I said, confused. “in fact,” he said. “while we’re making quiche and salad, can you go and gather some? Here.” He said, handing me a bowl, and a spear. “good luck!”
then He ran off to what I presumed was the kitchen. I looked around until I found a door. I went out, and stepped in something mushy. Sure enough, the snow was made of vanilla pudding. I kneeled down, and starting scooping pudding into the bowl, laying the spear down beside me. As I was scooping, I realized I was still crying, and that my tears were falling into the bowl. I still couldn’t believe that kitten and sunset were gone. They were like my tour guides, even in a world that I had created. After all, they actually lived here. Most of all, they were my companions, and I wouldn’t enjoy continuing on my own. Just then, I heard a gurgling sound. I looked up. Some of the pudding was starting to take a shape. I watched as the pudding finally took the rough shape of a human. I sat there, dumbfounded. Suddenly, the creature lunged forward, with its mouth as widely open as it could be, (which, for a creature made of pudding, is VERY wide.) I screamed and jumped out of the way. Then I remembered the spear that david had given me. I grabbed it, and threw it at the creature. It screamed, and flew into my bowl. But just as soon as that one was gone, another popped up, and when that one was gone, up popped another!
And so, it turned out that this was how you gathered mountain pudding.
By the time I went back into the snow house, I was exausted. But it was worth it, because the pudding was like none I had ever tasted, and tasted wonderful on the quiche. When the feast was done, we all washed the dishes, and soon I was able to get to the point.
“oh.” Said the david with glasses after I told them. “so that’s why you’re here. I’m terribly sorry, but if you’re in a hurry you’ll have to go through our house of illusions. It’s the quickest way off the mountain. Unless…” “unless what?” I said. “well, you could take the sled, but the mountain is so steep, and the pudding monsters don’t like it. However, the steepness of the mountain would make it fast.” “I’ll do it!” I said. “anything to save bluna! Show me where the sled is!” “alright. Follow me.” He led me down to their basement. “whoa.” I said. “dejavu.” The sled was very big, and we had trouble getting it through the door. But it paid off, and soon I was zipping down the mountain. Everything was going smoothly, until I began to hit some bumps. The bumps became bigger and bigger, and more kept popping up, until I finally hit one so big that I flew off the sled, and landed, hitting my head on a tree. I looked up. Upon further inspection I saw that the tree had a face, and it was looking straight at me! It raised one eyebrow. “who… are… you?” it said. “I’m Jessica.” I said, staring wide-eyed at it.
“you… May… Pass” it said, and lifted some of its branches to reveal a path. I got down from the tree, and started walking. As I was walking, I began hearing strange noises. But I ignored them, and walked on. I was sure I was nearing the exit, when I fell into a huge hole! I tried to climb out, but it was much to deep. So I sat and waited, hoping someone would rescue me.

I must have fallen asleep, because the next thing I knew, I was being carried off by who knows who, I couldn’t see them because they had put me in a sack, but I knew they couldn’t be friendly. Whoever it was put me down, and started talking.
“these durn people are so easy to trap! Back in my time it was harder. You had to actually set bait, and there weren’t just holes, no sir, there were nets, and cages and-“
“aw, shut up pa. we got it didn’t we?” said another. By then I was no longer sleep muddled, and began to try and chew a hole in the bag. After about 15 minutes of this,
I had made a hole big enough to see through. (the bag was very tough. I wouldn’t be surprised if it was bulletproof!) what I saw was unbelievable. My captors were deer!
“yes paw.” One said. “as soon as we git the fire goin, we’ll have ourselves some grilled human!” my eyes widened. I immediately began trying to get through the hole in the top where they had tied the bag, but no such luck! “alright paw,” I heard. “I got the fire started.” One of the deer picked up the bag, and started carrying me towards the fire! “here it is paw.” I was dumped out into the fireplace, and immediately ran away, my entire body in pain from the fire. “son!” I heard as I was running. “I dun told ya! You gotta kill it first!” as soon as I got a chance to rest, I sat down, and looked at the burn marks on my arm. They hurt. Bad. When I was done looking at my burns, I got up and looked around me. Behind me was just forest, but ahead of me was a bridge. With an Easter island head.

Chapter three:
In which Jessie meets the thief.

I looked at the head. I started to walk over the bridge, but the head said;
“no. answer question.”
“oh.” I said. “whats the question?” the Easter island head scrunched up its face, thinking.
And then answered; “what is two times three times four times five minus 118?”
I thought. This was obviously a trick question. I answered. “two?” the head scrunched up its head again, confirming the answer. “I will not tell. You walk across bridge. If bridge fall apart, answer wrong.” I gulped. I started walking across the bridge. It creaked a little, but it didn’t fall apart. “phew.” I said, and stepped off the bridge. Now I had to find the fairy princess. Maybe I could ask someone? I started walking around, keeping an eye open for any clue as to where she was. I looked up. It was getting dark, and I realized that I had forgotten to stop at the monkey kings tree house. Oh well. I kept walking until I saw a sign. It said; “this way the the realm of the fairy princess”
So I started walking that way, until I saw a gate. On the other side was a garden, and when I looked closer, a very small house.
There was a rustling inside of it, and someone came out. It was obviously the fairy princess. “um, hello.” I said. “ah!” she said. “here you are! We’ve been expecting you. Come in, come in. oh yes. The size issue. Ah well. Now, tell me why you’re here.” so I told her everything about the snow mountains, and the deer, and the man with the aurora gemstone. “ah.” She said. “well, if you want to find the man who took it, go back through the haunted forest, back over the mountain, and back to the sign you saw. Then just follow the sign that says ‘who knows?’.” “aw, man!” I said. “all that for nothing, and now I have to do It all over again?” “don’t worry! there’s another way off this island. It leads straight back to that sign. If you had looked up, you would have seen it. Come with me. She flew up and out of the garden, beckoning me to follow. I did, and followed her over to the start of the bridge. “look up!” she said. I did, and saw a skylift! “using this,” she said. “you can go back to the sign and not worry about any of the obstacles you had to pass while getting here. Climb up.” I climbed up the ladder into the skylift. “pull the lever!” I looked beside me. There was a lever sticking out of the wall. I pulled it, and began to move away. “goodbye!” I shouted through the window. “goodbye!” she shouted back to me. I was on my way.
After awhile of moving, I was set down next to the signpost, as promised.
I got out, and followed the sign saying “who knows?”
I kept walking, until I saw a castle. I was about to go in, when somebody hit me on the head with a rock! The last thing I heard was “pesky kids.” Then, all went black.
I awoke in a room made of stone. Even worse, I was in a cage!
I looked beside me. I saw kitten and sunset, in cages as well! “kitten! Sunset!” I said, excited. “Jessie! We were so worried!” said kitten. “but, how did you get here?” so, yet again, I told the whole story over. I was just finishing when a man walked in. he was carrying a big, bright crystal that could only be the Aurora Gemstone. He walked over to a machine in the middle of the room, and put the Gemstone inside. Suddenly the room started to shake! He looked over my way. “well well well! You’re awake.” He walked closer. “so this is the famed creator of bluna, eh? You don’t look so tough. I scowled. “what are you doing with the Aurora Gemstone?” I said. “it’s really very simple.”
He said, walking back over to the stone. “the Aurora Gemstone contains enough raw power, that when focused, which is what this machine is doing, it could be used to completely destroy bluna! Once it is reduced to less than rubble, I will once again use the power of the stone to recreate it to my liking! The only person in the way is you.”
“me?” I said, confused. “why am I in the way?” “because!” he said, surprised that I didn’t know. “you are the creator of bluna! Therefore, you can create anything more that you want! Oops. I guess I shouldn’t have told you that.” “hmm.” I thought. “anything I want? Ok then, I create a Sumatran tiger!” a tiger popped out of thin air, and began attacking the man! He ran out of the room, screaming! “ok.” I thought. “now I create a chainsaw!” a chainsaw popped out of thin air, and into my hands. I used it to get us all out of the cages. “cool!” sunset said. “now we just have to get the Aurora Gemstone.”
“ok!” I said, and used the chainsaw to get the stone out of the machine.
“wait a minute!” said kitten. “the Aurora Gemstone’s home is in the middle of the planet! How are we going to put it back?” “how do you think he got it out?” I said.
“I create a digging machine!” a tractor with a drill on the front popped up, and we all got in! “start!” I shouted, and we began to dig. After awhile, the tractor stopped digging, telling us it had reached the middle of bluna. We got out, and looked around. It was wonderful! We were in an underground cave, completely covered with gems,
And in the middle, was a diamond pedestal. I walked over, and placed the Aurora Gemstone on the pedestal. I couldn’t tell anything had changed, but when we got out of the cave, it was a sight to behold! While walking back to the palace, I saw that the color pond’s water was rainbow colored, the sky was blue, and white fluffy clouds floated above us. In the streets there were children playing, and animals playing with them, and inside the eagle palace was even more beautiful than I had imagined. Literally.
When we got back to the eagle palace, I was sad. Sure I had just saved a planet, but I would miss Svendoolia. I walked up to sunset. “sunset?” I said. “what?” “do you think” I said. “do you think I could stay here for awhile as Queen Eagle?” “well.”
Sunset said. “what about your parents? Wouldn’t they miss you?” “yes, I guess they would.” I sighed. “wait!” said kitten. “don’t you remember? The space warp can travel space and time! We just return her the moment she left!” “really?” I said. “so I can stay?” “yes!” said kitten. “now come on! I’ll show you all the clothes in your closet.”
And so, I had a great time in svendoolia, and came back a month later, the moment I left.
I also stayed for the whole of summer vacation, and went back when summer vacation began. It’s confusing, but I got used to it. Anyway, that’s the end, of my story, so;
The End.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

This is the second of your stories I have read. It shows good plot development. Logical endings are difficult to create. This ending is logical.


Keep writing 'cause I want to read more.

Grandpa Jack